StoopidGames's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[White VS Black]

This is at least starting to resemble a game.
There are some crucial things that you are missing that you NEED to include.
A challenge, or some way to lose the game.
Easier text buttons (use an image or region because the text itself is a pain to click on)
a menu option in game.

Basically play a well rated game on this site, and take note of everything that game has that yours doesn't and try to implement those things. Not trying to be mean, this is how you get better.

DLyonsTheNewground responds:

Huh, well OK.

[The Impossible Quiz Gens]

I feel like I've seen this before.... In 2007.... with higher quality.... and originality....

[sqrt Block]

visually not bad. Main character should be changed since it comes with the program, and the game should obviously be longer. I'd aim for around 15 stages before this could be considered complete.

[Fps Beta Build]

It's nothing, not really sure what you were expecting.

[Game about Squares]

It's actually not bad, but NEEDS sound

[Mini Monkey Madness]

A few suggestions
1) adjust walk animation collision bounds
2) make the transition region on the edge of frames smaller
3) make the coins more even not clumped
4) there is a slight delay as the monkey hits the coin, which feels weird gameplay wise

I think thats mostly it in terms of things that need improvement. Obviously this game is way to simple, but I feel like this is one of your first games so I won't criticize effort/work put in. Keep working and get better.

[Alice in a Mushroom Hole]

It's cool. Music was good, and visuals were good. I also really liked that you took a fairly common game type and added unique mechanics to it.

wakkawak responds:

Thank you

[DuckHunt [GX André]]

No cursor in the actual game, and a right click menu is probably not the best idea

[TODAY]

Wasn't sure how to play, but once I figured it out it was way too easy. (just hit the bullhorn until moral is full then hit flag, rinse lather repeat.)

HoytHoyGames responds:

The Idea of Today is be a Puzzle. When the player understand how solve, is to easy finished the game.

This game was made in 48 hour, at Global Game Jam!

Thanks for playing!

[Panda's Downhill]

You can see a whole four inches ahead of where you're going