StoopidGames's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[White VS Black]

This is at least starting to resemble a game.
There are some crucial things that you are missing that you NEED to include.
A challenge, or some way to lose the game.
Easier text buttons (use an image or region because the text itself is a pain to click on)
a menu option in game.

Basically play a well rated game on this site, and take note of everything that game has that yours doesn't and try to implement those things. Not trying to be mean, this is how you get better.

DLyonsTheNewground responds:

Huh, well OK.

[Alice in a Mushroom Hole]

It's cool. Music was good, and visuals were good. I also really liked that you took a fairly common game type and added unique mechanics to it.

wakkawak responds:

Thank you

[TODAY]

Wasn't sure how to play, but once I figured it out it was way too easy. (just hit the bullhorn until moral is full then hit flag, rinse lather repeat.)

HoytHoyGames responds:

The Idea of Today is be a Puzzle. When the player understand how solve, is to easy finished the game.

This game was made in 48 hour, at Global Game Jam!

Thanks for playing!

[DungeonGuy(temp title)DEM]

It can work. Jumping needs to be ironed out though (depending on if you're running the jump changes hight) also I can't reach the ladder after beating the skull enemy. Also, this game needs some uniqueness. It's fairly bland at the moment (mainly because this has been a genre that has been prevalent for almost as long as games themselves). Consider re-skinning the art to make it look more interesting.

Pipeweed responds:

You can access the ladder by jumping from the platform at right, you need to run fast tho! Hold the sword with z = will make you allso run faster and jump higher. :) The intro level is very early, i have been making the first dungeon as the first priority so far.

Graphics will improve, thanks for the comments! :)

[~GUNZ~]

Has potential, but it's way to clunky to be fun at this stage. Don't make the character have a hurt animation when they get hit, and moving and shooting are nearly impossible to do simultaneously

XtremelyVenomous responds:

it was purposely done that way so u need to avoid getting hit at all cost.

[Get the Cake!]

nothing even showed up, mac osx mavericks

kerihobo responds:

according to unity:

"Chrome became 64bit on Mac with version 39 and thus made our plugin incompatible. We are working on fixing that from our end."

could try in a browser other than chrome? like firefox or safari?

[Star Spangled Hero]

It looks very good, and the shooting feels very good (and the banjo-kazooie style text speech was cool too). A couple suggestions, bring the text box to the bottom so you aren't shooting through it. I'm not sure whether that was the intent or not, but it is visually a little annoying. Also there is no real challenge. I stopped shooting, and i never died and my score never went down, which makes this more of a counting app than a game. A simple challenge though will make this a very good game.

Kcori responds:

I'm glad to hear the shooting feels good! "Game feel" was something I was trying to experiment with when I made this. Hopefully the explosions feel good too.

I think you're probably right about the text box. Probably should have raised the ground up a tile and put the dialog down there.

In regards to there being no challenge, that was sort of part of the theme/message/whatever. I should probably stop choosing themes that are conducive of bad game design decisions. lol

[Jokes]

There's really no challenge, I never answered incorrectly. Also, the humor was too hacky to be entertaining. Also the music doesn't loop so once it runs out there's just silence.

DLyonsTheNewground responds:

AAAARRGGHHH!! 1 star!

[Rock Simulator 2015]

Ehhh... I feel like there needs to be a balance of humor and actual gameplay. It was a little funny, but really not anything special...

AerionsRealm responds:

Fair enough. :)

[Poo Football]

Pretty good. Definitely has potential and with a few tweaks can be very fun. One thing I'd suggest is fixing the ball's collision box. It seems like the it's uneven, so the guy on the right can chip (tsss tsss) the ball but the left one can't.

zotostap responds:

Thanks a lot for your opinion!)))) For sure I willthink what I can do! :-))))